Wednesday, October 29, 2014

A reader's suggestion led to Dirt Bike Daredevils



The seventh in my stories-behind-writing-the-books, which I offer intermittently here on my blog.

The cool thing about Dirt Bike Daredevils is that it happened entirely due to a reader’s suggestion. I was speaking at a school in Kelowna, British Columbia when, after my talk, Nikki Lawrence and her young son Levi came up to me afterwards. “Would you ever consider writing a book about moto-cross racing?” they asked.

“You never know,” I said with a smile.

“Because if you ever do, our entire family is into it and we could help.”

“Okay!” I said. And wouldn’t you know that just weeks later, my publisher announced he was extending my six-book series to ten and asked, “What will be the topic of your next book?”

“Moto-cross racing,” I declared, and got on the phone real fast to the librarian who’d sponsored me at the Kelowna school. She knew exactly which mother and son I was referring to, and as fast as that, I was in touch and working with the Lawrence family.

I attended a moto-cross race with them, carrying my notebook around while asking a stream of questions. I got to see the track they’d constructed on their ranch. I was impressed with the family-oriented get-togethers and the fun the young dirt-bikers were having. I also immersed myself in learning about free-style event and dirt-bike mechanics (luckily I had a neighbor willing to help me with the latter).

Then, while speaking at a school the other side of the country, I had a teacher come up to me and mention that her father-law was a former national champion. So I soon found myself working with Ron Keys as well.

Other notes about Dirt Bike Daredevils:
  • I had lots of fun naming the llama ranch where the book takes place (Back-of-Beyond Ranch) and the llamas on it: Furball, Hero, Salt and Pepper.
  • I immersed myself in information about llamas and their care, including watching videos on llama-cart racing, with help from a friend who owned a few llamas at the time, John Fulker. (When one of his children got married outside on their farm, they arranged ribbon-decorated hay bales for pews. They also put bow-ties on their llamas and allowed them to wander freely about the wedding gathering. When the music started up and the bride began walking up the “aisle,” the llamas snapped to attention and followed ceremoniously behind.)
  • The book kicks off with the sound of a rifle going off at dawn from the farmhouse window; the boys soon discover that their eccentric Russian boss just shot a rabbit from there. That’s taken from my father-in-law doing precisely the same on his farm in Somerset, England.
  • Having studied Russian in university, I couldn’t resist including some Russian characters and teaching my readers a few words, such as “silly” in Russian, which is pronounced “gloopy.”
  • The incident in which an eagle lifts a rooster from the farm, and is rising to take off with it when some well-aimed spit from a llama makes him drop it, is taken from a true incident in a country journal (acknowledged at the end of my book).
  • This was one of the most difficult books in the series to write, given that I knew nothing about motorcycles before I started (except for my experience at age 18 of driving my boyfriend’s motorcycle into a tree as he was attempting to teach me to ride -- something for which he was not grateful). While most of my books are one-third research and two-thirds writing, this one was the other way around, especially given the need for motorcycle mechanics to play a part.
To order Dirt Bike Daredevils: http://www.amazon.com/Dirtbike-Daredevils-Take-Xtreme-Withers/dp/1552858049/ref=sr_1_1?s=books&ie=UTF8&qid=1414629824&sr=1-1&keywords=dirtbike+daredevils

Tuesday, October 28, 2014

Meet my teen editor





TOP PHOTO: Malcolm and me at Tomales, California this past weekend, with the advance copy of Andreo’s Race in our hands. 
BOTTOM PHOTO: Three years ago in Ecuador, where I met Malcolm and family while researching my novel First Descent.
 I’m second from left. Malcolm is in the front. To my right are his mother Laurie, my friend Melanie, Malcolm’s father TM, and Malcolm’s brother Thomas. We’re at El Monte, an ecolodge in Mindo: http://www.ecuadorcloudforest.com/


 
Like many young-adult authors, I use a teen editor to ensure that I’m not using outdated teen expressions, that my characters ring true for their age and that the plot and dialogue passes muster with my target audience.

My teen editors read the manuscript before it goes to my editor, and they’re invited to make any input they like, but are asked to focus especially on dialogue. Each teen editor knows from the start that a) ) if they find nothing to change in my manuscripts, they get fired! J and b) they get retired at age 18 or so. (Malcolm is 16.)

My first teen editor was my son, from the age of ten until he lost interest sometime in high school. During our collaboration, I had to learn to take blunt and opinionated teen feedback (that’s my son for you), and he had to learn a bit of diplomacy.

My second teen editor was Julian Legere, who was thirteen when he enrolled in a youth writing workshop at which I taught. I was so impressed with his writing skills and maturity that I asked if he’d be my teen editor. Only several years and quite a few books later, when he entered college, did I seek out a replacement for him. My favourite moment of our collaboration was when he wrote in the margins of my manuscript, beside my use of the expression “parental units,” “NICE TRY!” (I dutifully edited it out, didn’t I, Julian?)

I met Malcolm Scruggs in Ecuador while researching my novel First Descent. Some readers may recognize the name; the grandfather in First Descent is named after him. Though a little shy of the process to begin with, Malcolm has worked into the job very well, and his knowledge of Spanish was useful for both First Descent (set in Colombia) and Andreo’s Race (set in Bolivia). Andreo's Race will be out officially in the spring of 2015 but can be pre-ordered here: http://www.amazon.com/Andreos-Race-Pam-Withers/dp/1770497668/ref=sr_1_1?ie=UTF8&qid=1414526550&sr=8-1&keywords=andreo%27s+race
Malcolm will shortly be at work on my next novel, about a canyoneer who gets stalked. 

Meantime, my husband and I spent this past weekend in Point Reyes, California with his family -- kayaking, beach-walking, marshmallow-roasting, and playing board games in a historic house in Tomales where we were staying. We also walked along the San Andreas fault. I was delighted to hear that Malcolm is taking up extreme sports, including whitewater kayaking.

A good time was had by all, including reminisces of our Ecuador time. You just never know where you might meet your next teen editor!

Friday, October 24, 2014

How tall is the tree that my character climbs?



How tall is the tree that my character climbs?

Okay, I don’t always give away how I research my novels, but you know what? When I have a character whose key act is to climb a very tall tree in British Columbia, Canada (near Lillooet, if you must know), I can’t just make up the species and height of the tree. Well, some authors would, but I take pride in doing research to keep my stories as authentic as fiction can be.

And this morning, while researching how tall the tree is that my character climbs, I found a very cool website: http://bcbigtree.ca/index.a5w

So, given the region in which I’ve chosen to set my current novel-in-progress, and the info on this big-tree website, I get to choose from an Engelmann spruce, white-bark pine, western white pine, black cotton wood or subalpine fir. And these measure anywhere from 14 meters (46 feet) in height to 56 meters (184 feet) in height. (The circumferences are pretty impressive, too: 3 to 5 meters, or 10 to 16 feet). If I want to, I can also quote the diameter and crown spread (hmmm, the latter might be important if a character climbs the tree to HIDE in the crown spread, right?).

Regarding the diameter, for it to have any meaning in my story, I need to measure a person’s outspread-arms span, and then figure out how many people it would take to circle the tree. That’s your math challenge for the day.

In other words, I don’t have to make things up, or become a lower-grade author by mentioning a tree species that doesn't actually exist in the region, or a height that is unrealistic for a species. Nor do I have to contact a forester or drive to the forest and climb a tree with a measuring tape. (I actually did climb a tree two days ago, but that was to get my kitten down, a whole other story.)

What did we do before the Web? Thanks, Big Tree index.

P.S. The tallest tree currently alive and well in British Columbia is a 127-meter (417 foot) fir. Long may it live. And if you’re not good at picturing measurements, that means the height of a 40-story building. Whoa! Would my character actually climb that?

Wednesday, October 22, 2014

The wingsuit jumper: too extreme for me



My husband and I spent the past three days in Yosemite National Park, California. We enjoyed perfect weather, stunning sights and a fun time hiking and sightseeing.

One of the more interesting moments was picking up a hitchhiker I will refer to as “Batman.” He was on his way up one of the mountains to jump off it – in a wingsuit. 

Now, I’ve written about a lot of extreme sports, but this one kind of ratchets up the definition of the phrase. It’s similar to basejumping, which is parachuting from a fixed structure or cliff. Except that wingsuiters wear a special outfit that creates a surface area by way of fabric under the arms and between the legs, not unlike the wings of a flying squirrel or bat. They also wear special parachute equipment they deploy to control the descent path after leaping.

Okay, but here’s the deal, according to our Batman hitchhiker. Although basejumping and hang gliding are legal in Yosemite Park (with restrictions), wingsuiting is not. The sport is legal throughout Europe, but anyone who hones their skills there and then eyes Yosemite Park or any other North American boulder that seems to invite leaping off it, has to worry big-time about detection and arrest. Therefore, they tend to jump only moments before dark, and land in far less open spaces than they would be able to in Europe, or than they would prefer to aim for if the sport were legal. In other words, to escape getting caught, they take on even more danger than the sport (which carries something like a 2% death rate) offers on its own. And if they upload videos of their activities, it can lead to arrest.

Imagine our Batman friend standing poised on a cliff hundreds of feet off the ground, waiting patiently for the sun to set. His eye is on a tiny clearing he hopes will be just large enough to not mess him up. His reward for pulling off the jump, stuffing his suit in his backpack and disappearing before park rangers arrive? “Zen-like moments” where all thoughts but the flight take over, and furthering his abilities within his chosen sport. That’s what he told us. I’d add a third: the ability to live another day.

Now, I’m not going to get involved in a discussion on whether wingsuit jumping should or shouldn’t be legal or enforced. But I will say that this is one sport I won’t be writing a novel about. Maybe it will become safer as more people get into it, equipment evolves and districts declare it legal. (I’d argue that hang-gliding went through that evolution.) And certainly, one person’s extreme sport is another’s safe, fun activity.

But in writing about so-called extreme sports, my goals have always been to:
1.     encourage teens (esp. boys) to read
2.     encourage them to get involved with sports, especially outdoors
3.     inform them about these sports
4.     promote the safety aspect within these sports as far as possible

Given the illegality of this sport in North America, it’s pretty hard to emphasize any safety aspect, which is rather hard to hone in on compared with others sports I’ve written about, anyway. So, I’ll pass. At the same time, I wish nothing but good luck to Batman and his compatriots. May they enjoy safe rides as long as they choose to pursue their passion.




Here’s a legal jump: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=o2xmAWS4akE
 

Friday, October 17, 2014

Immersed in canyoning

A few weeks ago I blogged about the new sport featured in my novel-in-progress:
http://pwithers.blogspot.com/2014/09/the-stunning-sport-of-canyoneering.html

As research for what my characters get up to, I'm currently "immersed" in researching canyoning. So here's another video on this extreme (and extremely interesting) activity, which mixes caving, rappelling (climbing down waterfalls and canyon walls) and swimming whitewater currents. Check it out!
https://vimeo.com/31640024

Wednesday, October 15, 2014

Best of books, worst of times



[The sixth in my stories-behind-writing-the-books, which I offer intermittently here on my blog.]

Vertical Limits may be the most popular book in my "Take it to the Extreme" series of 10 teen sports novels, but writing it was so painful that I will never be able to regard it as my personal favorite.

I’d written only the first two chapters when I suffered a back injury from a fall unrelated to sports, which all but halted the book altogether.

To finish it by deadline, I literally suspended my laptop above me and wrote while lying flat on my back. I also used software to dictate parts of it. The irony of writing a book on extreme rock climbing while in this condition was not lost on me.

Fortunately, I had already outlined and researched the book. Better yet, I was working with a sympathetic climbing expert. 

Other anecdotes about writing Vertical Limits:
  • This sixth "Take it to the Extreme" book was supposed to be the last in the series, but my publisher asked if I’d be willing to extend the series to 10 books, which I did. :)
  • My editor was so shocked by the extreme climbing portrayed in this story that she initially balked at accepting it. Only when I informed her that I’d worked with several climbing experts (and paid out of my own money to have the editor of the Canadian Alpine Journal read it before I submitted it to her) did she relent. I learned later that she has a fear of heights, just like my character Peter.
  • To write the chapter where Peter visits a hypnotist to get over his fear of heights, I actually paid to go to a hypnotist (where I pretended to have a fear of heights). The hypnotist actually referred to “past life modalities,” and much of what the hypnotist says in Vertical Limits was taken from my actual session. Of course, the hypnotist didn’t know I was using her to write a chapter, but she got her fee, I got my chapter and my character Peter got over his fear of heights, so everyone was happy!
  • The runaway girl in the story, Katja, was inspired by a teen girl I met who, like Katja, nursed her cancer-ridden mother almost singlehandedly for months until her mother passed away.
  • In Acknowledgments, I thank Shaun Evans, a climber whose real-life escapades with climbing cranes in an industrial yard inspired my characters doing the same. By the way, my main character Jake took his last name, Evans, from Shaun and his brother David (who was in the kayak club for teens that I ran at the time).
  • It took me many years to recover from the back damage done by the fall (the one that so complicated the writing of Vertical Limits). It pretty much ended my kayaking days, but thankfully, I’ve managed to continue writing.
To order Vertical Limits: http://www.amazon.com/Vertical-Limits-Take-Xtreme-Withers/dp/1552857832/ref=sr_1_5?s=books&ie=UTF8&qid=1413414747&sr=1-5&keywords=vertical+limits

Friday, October 10, 2014

Parent University (because kids don't come with directions)

 
Raise your hand if you felt stumped or overwhelmed when you arrived home from the hospital with baby in arms. Of course we all did: They don't come with directions!

But until this week, I for one had never heard of Parent University, a concept involving seminars and conferences for parents. (Google turns up 167,000,000 references to the term.)
 

I'm not sure when the first one came to be, or who came up with the clever name, but at the moment, Parent Universities exist (unrelated to one another as far as I can tell) in Savannah, Minneapolis, New Haven, Boston, Chicago, Fresno, Tampa, Scottsdale, Reno and a whole lot of other USA places. (Comment here if you know of more.)

I get my first initiation at one tomorrow, here in Castro Valley, California where I am visiting. I'll be manning a table and passing out tips on raising reluctant learners, as well as selling my books, including Jump-Starting Boys:

Parent University, Castro Valley Adult & Career Education
3rd Annual Parenting Conference
Strategies and Resources for Raising Successful Children
Castro Valley Adult and Career Center
4430 Alma Ave.
Castro Valley, CA 94546
(510) 886-1000
http://www.cv.k12.ca.us/news/ParentUniversityFlyer2014.pdf
http://www.cvadult.org/courses/parenting/parent-university/item/296-parent-university

Hats off to all who organize and participate in these educational efforts. As parents, we need all the help we can get!